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Sui Cide

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It all started on one rainy day. I’d hate to admit this but I was bullied a lot and this is what this story is mostly about: me being bullied. But not just that; the fact that an accident occurred to one of my friends. Cars and ponies gathered towards him as I dashed over to help. He was stuck in a giant mud pile and was not able to move. As I flew above him, I started to use my magic to levitate him to the grass. If you have not noticed yet, I am an alicorn. A mixed specious of pegasi and of unicorn. A VERY dangerous being that you’d not want to meet in dark corner of town. As I used my magic, I felt sharp objects hitting me as I flew upwards. It was the bullies who’d always pick on me. They had rocks in their hooves and they threw it at me. Camp, my friend that I was trying to save from the mud pile, confronted them in an angry tone. They stepped back a little and grinned. I looked downwards towards Camp with a worried look on my face. “Are they going to stop?” I asked and flew upwards even faster. “I hope so. They really need to stop this bulling act. It’s not going to get them anywhere in life…” Camp sighed. “I just hate it when they hurt you like that. Do you have to deal with them every day?” I looked up to the dark and grey sky and nodded slowly to his question.

 

An hour or so later, it was 7:30 am. Middle Filly School started at 7:59 am and I didn’t want to be late! I dashed with my wings with my friend behind me. “SUI! SLOW DOWN!!!” He yelled. I did as he said; or yelled and slowed down. I gasped for breath about seven times and told him that I was sorry and explained why I dashed so fast. “Sui, I understand that you’d not want to be late. You’re never late. Just calm down, ok?” I grinned happily and flew right by his side. Camp and I talked a little more about the bullies and who they were. “The grey earth pony is Mars and the red one was Demon. They always throw sticks at me. But I’d never expect them to throw rocks at me.” Camp sighed and placed his hoof on my shoulder. “Don’t worry yourself too much, Sui. I’m sure that they will stop eventually. Now, when have they started this?” I sighed and flew a half an inch closer. This all started last summer…”

“LAST SUMMER!? ARE YOU FREKIN’ SAYING THAT THEY’VE DONE THIS TO YOU SENCE 2013!?” he exclaimed. I sighed and nodded. “Well what did you do to get them to hate you so much?” I looked away from Camp and looked at the wilderness. There were trees everywhere like a regular forest and lots of ponds, birds, deer and other animals. “Sui?” I looked back at Camp and took a deep breath and sighed. “Well, they just do it because they think it is funny amongst them. They started bulling me ever since I was a little filly. Around six or seven years old they started this.” I sighed again and looked down to the grass until we reached the school. There they were again. Starring directly at me with rocks in there hooves ready to fire at me at any moment. I came to a halt and flew around the school. Camp did the same. I guess he saw them as well as I had. I flew towards the front door and landed softly next to my flying partner. “Did we lose them?” I asked in concern. “I think we did.” Suddenly, a rock hit me in the chest. I gasped as I saw the two creeping towards us. “We’ve got to run! We have no other choice! I dashed after he said ‘run’ and ran as fast as I could. Mars was behind me on the left side and Demon on the right. I couldn’t see Camp anywhere in sight. As I dashed I was hit with several rocks. I came to a halt as I saw a dead end. I turned around to the evil laughs of my rivals. I gasped as they threw several more rocks at me. I ducked my head and dodged the rocks. Suddenly, a very sharp rock hit my right eye and I screamed in pain. Blood dripped out of my socket. “SUI!!!” I heard Camp in the distance as I passed out onto the green grass as more rain drops hit my body.

 

I finally had awoken from my deep slumber in a pure white room. “Well, well, look who awoke from her surgery.” A blue stallion with a yellow mane said as he walked over to me. “B-but my eye.” He stroked my mane as I sobbed. “I fixed you up in a stitch. Your friend, Camp, called the police as soon as you passed out. You should be very great full of him. If he did not call us, you would’ve bled to death.”

“B-but what about my eye? Isn’t it still gone?” The doctor nodded and smiled. “Yes. Your previous eye is permanently gone. Luckily, if you haven’t noticed, I fixed you as I have said. I replaced your right eye with a robotic eye. This way, you can see a lot better and you will never be blinded. And also, this eye will never come out.” I smiled as I hugged him happily. “But what about those ponies that threw the rocks at me?” The doctor smiled faintly and frowned. “They will be charged for fiscal violence. And they will be briefly suspended for the rest of the week in prison to see what it is like. Because if they keep this up, they’ll most likely live or die there.”  I smiled at the ‘die’ part. They deserve it. After all, they did commit a crime, right? “C-can I see Camp?” He nodded, “Why of course, Sui! Why wouldn’t I allow that?! He saved your life, after all.” I grinned as he walked out the door and left it open. 

 

“SUI!” Camp exclaimed as he gave me a huge hug. “Oh, Sui. I thought that you would’ve DIED! I’m SOOOO relived!!!” He sobbed into my mane. He then apologized for crying as he pulled away. “No no. You have complete right to cry, Camp. I did almost die, after all.” He smiled and hugged me again. “I’m sorry that you don’t have your other eye. H-how does it feel having a new eye? Especially a robotic eye?” I smiled, “Ok, I guess. It is awkward blinking though. It’s like the eyelashes and the part of my eyelids are made out of metal.” Camp smiled awkwardly and handed over a mirror. “Maybe you should take a closer look.” I then levitated it to me and gasped. My eyelids were made out of metal! I looked at the color as well. Instead of a hazel-like color, it was dark red. I then noticed a drip of black liquid dripping out of the robotic eye. “That’s normal, according to the doctor. When you cry, your robotic eye cries too.” I placed my hoof over to the eye and wiped away the black liquid. I looked at it and examined it very closely. It looked like some kind of oil-like substance combined with water. I wiped it onto the bed and shrugged. “What’s wrong?” I shook my head and smiled nervously, “Nothing. I was just thinking about that black liquid. That’s all.” Camp then hugged me quickly and trotted towards the door. “Come on, Sui! The doctor said that we could leave whenever we want to! Let’s head home!” He started to fly upwards until he hit his head against the ceiling. I giggled a little and got up from the bed and started to fly towards the door. I then busted through the door and laughed at my opponent Camp…

 

 Later that night, I climbed into bed and sighed at the moon and stars. For some reason, I felt several shivers travel down my spine as if I was afraid of something. I pulled the covers over my head and sighed as I fell into a deep sleep. An hour or so later, I awoke with a screaming voice saying, ‘Don’t go….’ And screaming voices followed by a blood curtailing splat and chop. I looked into a mirror and sighed in relief. To think that my eye would control me was rather silly. I mean, come on! That’s like saying that the Grinch didn’t steal Christmas, right? Suddenly, I felt a cold shiver down my spine as I glimpsed at the mirror again. My eye turned darker and was dripping the black liquid again. I smiled as if I couldn’t control myself and placed a hoof upon my eye. I smiled wider and wider until my mouth couldn’t move upward anymore. “P-p-p-perfect…” I said as I smiled even more followed by a laugh. “I w-want Camp to be perfect like-no.” I corrected myself as I smacked myself across the face. “I-I need to KILL the ones who have harmed me. St-starting with Demon and Mars.” I opened the window to the outside air. I jumped as I opened my wings and swooped upwards. A minute or so later, I had to think of some kind of weapon to kill the enemies with. Suddenly, I passed by a lumber jack’s home. I swooped downwards and levitated the weapon towards me. It was an iron axe that was MEANT to cut wood. “Well, little killer, heh heh, you will be a wonderful weapon for killing and SLICING innocent flesh!!!” I laughed maniacally as I swooped up to the night sky with several more laughs. I honestly never felt this alive in years! I felt WONDERFUL!

 

A minute or so later, I finally reached the Jail of Akia. I landed near a wide opened window and swooped quickly inside. I then dashed with my axe controlled by my horn and searched for my victims. I then finally reached them after the long journey of searching for them. I used my horn to unlock the jail cell and opened it. I crept in the darkness towards them ever so silently. I then looked at the two sleeping earth ponies and giggled silently. “There there, you two. Your misery will soon end now…” I then laughed as I lifted my axe and SLICED off Mars’s head. The axe hit his neck so hard that his head rolled near the door of the cell. I laughed maniacally as I lifted the axe again to kill the next victim. But before I could do anything, I smelt the blood and licked the axe to get the blood off. I then finished a little later then continued with my new ‘master piece’ of gore and suffering. I then noticed that Demon was gone. I silently whimpered as I examined the cell. I eventually found him near the jail cell’s door in tears as I lifted up the axe. “P-p-p-please! Sui!  I’m so so sorry for throwing that rock into your eye!!! P-please! Spare me! PLEA-“I placed my hoof over his lips and sliced the axe quickly across his neck. I laughed softly as I fled the scene of the crime that I had done.

 

I then flew back home as I felt complete joy over me. I loved the feelingly of killing someone and the joy of slicing their heads off clean like a grim reaper. That’s it! I thought, I should rename myself to Sui hmmm…. HUH! Sui Cide! I love it! I laughed again as I flew home. Once I reached the bridge to the door, I was stopped by Camp with a furious look on his face. I then grinned at him, “What’s wrong?”

“You know damn well what’s wrong here, Sui! It’s two am and you’re covered in- what are you covered in?” I laughed as I crept slowly closer towards him and placing a hoof on his shoulder. "I am no longer Your ‘Sui’ as you have remembered. I am SUI CIDE!!!” I yelled and raised the axe behind him for a sneak attack. “Sui, I know you are very angry, but you don’t have to do this. I know how upset you are but PLEASE stop!” Camp cried with tears falling from his eyes. “P-please…” He cooed while starring into my eyes. “I cannot let you live, Camp. You will obviously call the police on me. Won’t you?”

“N-no, Sui. I promise I will not!” He cried out again. I smirked and kissed his cheek as I slowly sliced his neck off. I frowned at the mess and began to burst into tears. “NO! I’m SORRY! PLEASE! COME BACK! PLEASE! I’M SO SORRY I’M SORRY!” I cried out into the moon light. I knew at that very moment that I have turned into a monster and I would never change as long as I am breathing. I know that I will have to kill other victims for a living. I’m sorry, Camp. I’m sorry Mars. And I’m sorry Demon. I regret destroying you for fun. Hehe, I don’t think I do though because you have given me so much pain in my life.

I shall see you in hell real soon, victims…heh heh heh…

 

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Revenge... Well, for me Mars and Demon deserved for that end. BTW I have torture chamber. *smiled really evil*